Yesterday we finished our writing. Here my writing enjoy.
Last year, Mum, Dad, Harry and I went to the zoo. Dad was wearing a wooly cardigan jersey with green red and orange well I was and I was wearing a green and red buttoned shirt. Harry and I were jumping everywhere. We were so excited.
Stuck in traffic, we could hear beeping, shouting and a waling of silence. Harry and I were bored and secretly kicked him in the shin without him watching and then we started to punch each other, kick and smack harder and harder as we were fighting it out. Angrily dad shouted, ¨If you don’t stop this now I will turn back and we won’t go to the zoo.¨
When we finally got there, we had to stand in a long queue. It was so slow I wanted to leave.After what felt like one hour we finally reached the ticket window
Dad who hated paying for anything began fighting with the ticket man.he tried to get harry in for half price (which is when I pretend to be with another family. Cage by cage, animal by animal, foot by foot we wandered around the zoo.we saw an elephant weeping in circles padding in an inch of water.Creature to creature, cage by step by step, we wandered around the zoo. We watched an elephant swaying from side to side and bobbing its head constantly. I thought it must be really depressed. It looked as lonely as a needle in a haystack.
“Can we have brunch now?” moaned harry.
“We’ve only just got here!” Snapped Snappy Dad.
“But we are starving.” I moaned.
“I don’t care, you’ll have to wait!” Yelled dad.
“But I didn’t have anything for breakfast!” Cried Harry, fizzing with anger.
The vane on his forehead was about to pop, dad turned to us and roared,
¨Stop moaning or we will go back home.
Ever the placemaker, mum quickly rooted around for the bag of snacks. It contained moreish mini sausages and refreshing red apples.
Movinging on we saw a tiger and a jaguar, the tiger was deadly orange furry, the jaguar was yellow, spotty, big and also deadly. Harry and I started to roll around on the ground fighting. Mum thought, ‘why do my kids have to alway fight when on a trip can’t we be at peace for once?’ She raised her voice, in commotion, ”Could you just stop for a moment”.
Lucily, she was drowned out by an announcement about the penguin show.
Dad decided to share his favorite funny (very bad) penguin joke. He was laughing so hard that he almost fell into the water. After a great display it was time for lunch.herby sausages , great clips and fresh garden peas. We were a lot happier now that our tummies were full and we were ready to go to the next animal.looking foolish going back a forwood.Its coat is as white as clouds on a cloudy day.snap! Bang! Kaboom! Suddenly Harry and I were throwing punches again on the concrete with stones.Mum had had it.She was a nuke about to hit the ground and explode.
She said we belonged in cages, not the Animals The family day was officially over. this book is based on the Zoo by Anthony Brown brown